Another View Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Another View

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if i could afford the world
a view of another world
through my verses like the
ocean that hides yet magnifies
a world so glorious of its own -

freewheeling corals, zizagging fishes,
multihued starfishes, shells that grant
the ocean a contest of geometric elegance
giant meditative clam that turns out a luxurious
ochreous pearl impervious to the pounding waves
a monk zooming on zero desires for nirvana -

my life as a poet would have been well rewarded

the rainbow the sun never fails
to illuminate in the fall of heavenly
sweats and tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 27 August 2006

A beautiful read, peaceful and the imagery shines. Loved it

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***** ********* 27 August 2006

I hope one day John, to be able to look and see as you do! the pure beauty of the world instead of my blinkered dark past. A wonderful poem of hope and fantastic imagery of what the free thinking poet can give the reader. I love it John, it is one of your best imo. Smiling at you, Tai

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john tiong chunghoo

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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