The grape vine rises
then bends towards apple flowers
I wait to quench thirst
Lorraine, A lovely haiku. I notice you don't follow the 5-7-5 rule..10 from me! Dorothy
this is the best of your haiku I have read so far. keep it up.
This is perfect.......just so nice. I liked it..............10
Dorothy after I got your coment on y e-mail i went this haiku and recounted.it does follow the 5-7-5 syllable count.Thanks for the ten.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love haiku form, what a challenge to write some thing amazing in so few words. You have done that well. You have captured nature and painted a picture for us. Well done.