Ants (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Ants (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


ants greet with kisses
dragging enormous burdens—
why in such hurry?

Monday, May 23, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: insects
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 23 May 2016

Awesome, great imagery.......10+++++

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Kelly Kurt 23 May 2016

Sometimes we all act as ants

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2017

Brief but much impressive. Nice haiku on ants. Thanks for sharing.

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Terry Craddock 03 June 2016

Rain Coming Rushing with worker ants an increased rush comes before rain Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Ants' (Haiku) by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Rajesh Thankappan 29 May 2016

It is certainly a point to ponder and when we ponder upon it, it shall fill us with wonder. Nice observation.

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Terry Craddock 26 May 2016

with ants an increased rush often comes before rain, nice, I especially love the first two lines 10+

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 May 2016

However, we can always learn from the ants. Nice work.

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