Apology Poem by David Darbyshire

Apology

Rating: 4.6


When you came home Late
and you were in a real state.
I think we all agree
what I need is, 'an apology'

But you must realize
when you apologize
This comes from within,
and not from a face with a stupid grin

So lets make a fresh start
no more sorry's, no excuses
and we will see
what this produces

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 27 June 2006

dave, u r so right, whats the point of a sorry if its just mouthed? to the point poem! Preets

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Nalini Hebbar 26 June 2006

call a spade a spade...thats what i can expect from you...great stuff...nalini

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Duncan Wyllie 19 June 2006

Very muture and honest write here, you had stated what you needed to say and without malace A great lesson for many Love Duncan x

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Kristin Davis 19 June 2006

Amen! Mr Darbyshire Amen! All I know to say is been there done that before! Short, simple and well said! A great read I give this an awesome eight! ~~~~~~~Kris~~~~~~~

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