Dustbin goes blue, grass
Littered with peel; revellers
colour blind, walk past...
This reads more than a Senryu...much insight into this piece... Art of selective phrasing...10
But some people are partially colourblind Some people cannot identify and distinguish colour or shades of blue--we call them teal in UK what is sky-blue catchy term in India, in Italy-Azure deep blue is Turquoise in UK and it varies from place to place pale blue is Light Teal....................in that sense So if some1 have had my sensibility in the dustbin of blue-i won't be worth grass littered in peel--a good emphatic write
But your creative vision is always 20/20, dear Mamta. Perception is a gift, after all. Merry Christmas. Love, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
how color blindedness can hamper the vision (and not sight) is truly captured here...loaded with meaning..your words do the magic again...