! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Bonfire- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Bonfire- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Sit around bonfire,
Sparks rise and fly like glow worms;
Charred logs fall with thud.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 25 December 2009

Very vivid images prtrayedin this lovely haiku.....

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Vinod Kumar 26 December 2009

The sacred fire to create, cure, and completion, thanks 10+

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Ranjit Ravindran 26 December 2009

Bonefires are so comforting. It has been a long time I have sat near one!

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Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2010

good work...symbolic...10

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Indira Renganathan 21 March 2010

We have bonfire in the temples on the day of the festival 'Karthikai' for Lord Shanmukha or Karthikeya in Tamil Nadu...nice reading your poem

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Ritty Patnaik 17 January 2010

warmth flows in from the bonfire, as this is the right season for it.lovely haiku mamta.even a poem can warm you up with good feelings, in a winter morning! ritty

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 January 2010

could feel its souls warmth could see the fire fly in air in this death of wood a lovely haiku mam...you gave me a senryu

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premji premji 30 December 2009

scintilla of poetry....................

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