Artificial Feeling Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Artificial Feeling



A good life is what I smell
And tell
To people
How it is beautiful!

If I get forceful smile
That shall lend me in trouble
Make people weary
And gesture shown shall be artificially

When everything is on hire!
Why should I put peace on fire?
Life is not mine
Even death is divine

I know only about future
With no consequences for sure
Death is uncertain
So why should I feel pain?

If I can move worry free?
If I can watch birds under tree
I am most fortunate man on earth
Who remembers God with full faith!

More I feed to body
Less shall feel it hearty
It shall have artificial feeling
Frankness may have no dealing

Sunday, January 11, 2015
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 January 2015

Re: Aertificial feeling (Score: 1) by induce on Thursday, January 15,2015 (23: 22: 40) Jadia, the imagery of the birds under a tree, stands out in imagery. Almost like a drawing, I enjoy your 'versing' style/s. keep penning, induce

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2015

A good life is what I smell And tell

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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