As My Heart Fails Poem by shelbie bozeman

As My Heart Fails



the broken pieces
laying among the gound
continually being crushed
even more as
every second of life
goes by

pieces of the heart
being crushed into nothing
creating itself
a monster.
With no heart
to love
and no heart to care
there is only a empty shell
wandering hopelessly
in this world
causing hatred
and evil
because of the boy
who destroyed it
so long ago.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 02 August 2009

pieces of the heart being crushed into nothing creating itself a monster. With no heart to love and no heart to care there is only a empty shell wandering hopelessly in this world causing hatred and evil because of the boy who destroyed it so long ago. really a master piece poem with very sweet logic and the way you done it is really interesting and impressive and even heart and soul touching... reality, and cause and effects are inter relating to each others..loved it..well done 10.10

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Brooke Cadwell 01 August 2009

A true masterpeice. Have you considered being a poet? I mean you already are but I mean as a carrer.

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Ershad Mazumder 15 August 2008

Thanks dear bozeman for sharing this piece with us. I consider this a real poetry.

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