hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 26,861 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

At first


If person is shot and dead
The message is cleared read

If the lines are drawn on religion basis
There is clear understanding with basic

If birth of child has place in midst hatred and mistrust
The people have reason to remain with no trust

If life has many ups and downs
The fault should be known

If wife scolds at you all the times
Think of shortage at home sometimes

If there is tug of war and fight between family members
There is clash of interest among them to remember

Between “if” and “but” there remains lack of understanding
Why at all we think aimlessly and go on offending?

Some of the subject matters are not of our concern
They will get automatically solved in turn

Think of circle around that exists
Come out of it successfully at first

Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 19, 2013

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