Subir Ningthouja


At Leaving - Poem by Subir Ningthouja

The 42 year old woman,
gasping every painful breath
with her emaciated frame
coaxing her MDR -TB moth eaten lungs
for every labored breath
The husband dumbly rubbing her back
and I forcing his face mask back on
while pumping some deriphyllin into tired veins
coaxing the oxygen valve
that was behaving a king
in a pauper 's land
I, looking into her eyes
glazing with the memories
of the fields and children,
that rare fish curry
followed by his loving lips...
Till I closed those eyes
with my indifferent fingers
for the next moth eaten lungs.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A doctor at the dying moments of a young TB patient leaving behind her husband and children

Comments about At Leaving by Subir Ningthouja

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/17/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    painful breath, good poem, thanks.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 18, 2013


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