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(12-06-1958 / Nellore, Andhra Pradesh)

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ATONEMENT

It was a broad moon light robbery
The theft was notified
The bandit was identified
Alas! Under the Romantic Penal Code
There is no court! No plaint
In fact it is the culprit
Who is loved the most
And the lost gets the nemesis
Of living the life left
In total emptiness
But, no regrets
It is atonement
To be bereft of heart

Sathya….

Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, July 22, 2008


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  • Queeny Gona (9/6/2013 7:27:00 AM)

    Very mysterious and mystical write dear uncle. I am decepted by the fore lines of the write but on knowing the intent that the culprit is loved most I got the heart of the writer. Wonderful.


    But I understood it in another way too uncle!

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  • Dr.Wardha Jawdat (8/27/2009 1:25:00 AM)

    a very soulfully romantic piece....well done sathya

  • Bob Blackwell (10/19/2008 4:41:00 AM)

    A robbery of the heart, it can only be atonement. Bob

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/8/2008 7:09:00 AM)

    a 10 for this fine composition.........thanks

  • Booklover Tv Lounger (8/24/2008 2:05:00 AM)

    I can't think of any words that give this poem the justice it deserves, except...Wow! Such beauty.

  • Ency Bearis (8/5/2008 7:38:00 AM)

    a well vivid concepts....well done...

  • Fay Slimm (7/31/2008 6:02:00 AM)

    A beautifully executed word picture. Well done Sathya. Poetry if surely for the full and satisfied life whereever we live. Keep up your production. Greetings from Cornwall U.K.

  • Rema Prasanna (7/25/2008 9:29:00 PM)

    totally legal but there is beauty of verse..this is an interesting write and a well composed one, it is different and sylish..10

    Rema

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (7/25/2008 7:33:00 PM)

    This is the world we are living in-a nice poem.

  • , aryaindia (7/24/2008 12:13:00 PM)

    The theft of the heart is the most heinous crime but has no punishment whatsoever. How smartly you have written this small yet sweet poem. best wishes, arya

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