Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 5,723 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Attack Of The Snowflakes Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

There is nothing like

being pelted by Heaven's

dizzy frozen tears


I wish Heaven would

quit crying so that Spring would

finally get here


White spirals downpour

Winter's avenging ninjas

disappear from sight


Wrong season snowfall

shouldn't happen at this time

Nature's ten foot mess


How can such tiny

feather light flakes reach such high

accumulation?


Was Heaven angry

when our planet rocked and rolled

wrapped like a snowball


Glacial planet

shaking to the music of

the sphere's legacy


What a cold promise

when the weather teases me

longing a Spring sign


I've come to realise

Winter, the mini-ice age

is Earth's sleepy time


I'm stuck shoveling

a ton of snowy cold ice

caused by climate change


I could really use

that global warming just send

it posthaste my way.


Comments about Attack Of The Snowflakes Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/3/2014 11:57:00 PM)

    .such a delightful poem...........thanks for sharing it with us......... (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,675 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (7/15/2011 4:51:00 AM)

    How delightful! Such a pleasure to read...even now!

    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Knight (8/28/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    Hi Lorraine - Nice to meet a California Girl also nice to find a fellow Hiakuist! I am posting one about the months of the years. I like Haikus in bundles - one can write a real story. Well done 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raynette Eitel (5/17/2009 11:36:00 AM)

    This is indeed lovely work, but nothing surpasses your first stanza. It is a poem all to itself. I would let it stand like a mysterious crystal tear all alone. Raynette (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rosalita Fernandez (4/11/2009 7:37:00 PM)

    This is such a lovely poem! brilliant, brilliant brilliant! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Myrtle Thomas (3/22/2009 7:57:00 PM)

    Lorraine, this is so beautiful, Your imagery was tops. i could see and sence the cold little boogers on my nose and cheeks.Oh so pretty 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Meggie Gultiano (3/22/2009 7:33:00 AM)

    a nice haiku.wish i can write like this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/21/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    Wonderful haikus. A gift of winter indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Bonnie Collins (3/17/2009 9:07:00 AM)

    Yes, I totally agree with you! ! Writen with much imagery... Bonnie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pablo Cruise (3/16/2009 12:01:00 PM)

    Hah! You took the sentiments right out of head. Wonderful, whimsical! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (3/15/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    wonderful...i hope i will writelike this when i grow up! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (3/12/2009 2:15:00 PM)

    I appreciate your distaste for winter at this time of year and your sense of humor. Some very original and creative thoughts. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 15, 2011


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