Away... Poem by Lily Law

Away...

Rating: 5.0


Gazing out the white casement of mine,
I see the soothing blue sky filled with bubbly clouds,
I feel the cold breeze wafting the sensation of morning,
I hear the charming melody of violin played a distance away,
I get a whiff the sweet fragrance of Easter Lilies from the meadow,
But all of these seem just like a beautiful fairytale,
In the far away kingdom,
For I forever trapped in the ambiance of lost,
Lying in the gloomy darkness,
Away in the land of Nod,
Alone,
No one but all by myself,
How I yearned to meet Gabriel,
And ask for the reason of this mark of Cain,
How I longed to meet dear deity,
And beg for mercy to end my breath,
For all I desire is the ending of this chapter of mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 11 November 2011

you must not be pessimistic.nice poem though.keep inking.

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nomad omnia 28 September 2009

This begins in light and white...right down to the Easter lilies...and then ends in blackness. Lulled into peace, then pulled into the nightmare. A riveting piece. N

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Jerry Hughes 25 September 2009

Ending this chapter? Good god I hope not, you're much too talented to allow yourself to get so maudiln Lily. Hugs, Jerry

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Lily Law

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Sarawak, Malaysia
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