Saw you treading,
away from me steadily.
Leaving in my heart,
deep anguish and pain.
Moments when we were together,
Started coming in an endless flash.
Taking me away from my present,
to the world of sweet memories.
Once so near and now so far,
It seems a distance of thousand oceans.
Raging so high,
Making things look even more far.
When the moment was drawning near,
I felt for the first time,
That I am going so far from you,
Away from the warm feelings we always had shared.
And I felt,
My love was not enough for you.
I could have love and care you even better,
Than all love I have showered on you from my childhood days.
N.B (for my sister)
25/05/09
Such a poignant composition................Thanks for the nice read i had......10
Love has its strange ways of assertion, Winnie...the more you are away the more it makes you yearnig for your dear ones...nice poem...love and passion well expressed...10
so sweet...radiating strong passion for a loved sister....she must be be so lucky to have you...
love is an unending story, it comes and it goes..this poem is well penned..grace
A lovely tribute for a sister's love.....I bet, whn she read this, her eyes wll wet for sure....lovely 100+++ sebastine.....
'My love was not enough for you.I could have love and care you even better' You made me to think of my sister too. Lovely poem. Great write Thanks for sharing with me.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Words filled with love and so much more, beautiful, simply beautiful. Take care, Martine