Be A Man Poem by Rocky Ess

Be A Man



You need Mommy to fight your battles,
you have no one on your side;

Your righteous indignation you are
mistaking for your pride.

You sit in a corner and whine
waiting for others to make a move,
but you are the only one who has
something he needs to prove.

Be a man!
Be a man!
You look like such a fool, I wish you
would open your mouth so I could tell you
you're a tool.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bethany Buhl 30 June 2008

Seems to me that you think a man can't show to much emotions without look weak and some men don't like to fight so they get there mother to do it for them. I'm not saying it's right that they do it but it happens.

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Jasmine Margetson 20 March 2008

ouch..slightly harsh..but greatly appreciated..loved the intensity..

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