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Be Her Heart To Thee Laid Far Off Of Farthest Reach?

Is this bottled up TENSION? ...
Doth drink of spirits help he rescue one or more lonesome maidens?

No courage of heart...
Lips do sip to tendered start.

How may she meet into his lips? ..
Lackly spirited courage of faith.

Bent to will's of her mistake...
I give thy heart to her to take.

Like a long longest rake left out of reach...
To gather to thee her loving's unbreach.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 17, 2006
Edited: Wednesday, October 20, 2010

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  • Original Unknown Girl (10/18/2006 1:33:00 AM)

    Michael this is beautifully written. I can feel the tension, the romance... the yearning! It's wonderful! Helen: -) xxx

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/17/2006 8:25:00 PM)

    TH' CUPLET STAVZAS WORK SO WELL, HERE, MICHAEL J.!
    you said it; TENsion, is right! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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  • Geoff Warden (10/17/2006 3:49:00 PM)

    Truely did like this write Michael...........well done....

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