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Be my heaven...
need you..
as you were into my dream last night..
need you a woman, , a lady, , a female..
need you the angel...
the angel into my heaven...
need you a lover that gave me a love into a poetic seconds that we spent last night into our dream..
my dream which were about you..
dream that we did all what our souls and bodies asked for...
dream that no one ever can imagine or read...
only me and you..
be my heaven..
be the heaven which i need...
be the hero of happiness..
into my paradise..
sweetheart...
they called me a lover, because i love you...
called me an adorer, because i adore you...
called me the dreamer, because i dream always about you...
be my heaven...
be my dream...
my really dream...
a reality to my life...
be my desires...
be my lust...
be the first and the last..
to live an endless life..
together into our city...
city for love...
only me and you and our love...
sweet dreamy girl...
here your dreamy lover...
waiting to create with you the heaven...
greatest heaven inside me...
that which all lovers wish to be into our heaven..
could you be, sweetheart? ...
by: hazem02@yahoo.com
hazem al jaber
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Sunday, June 28, 2009 |
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Sunday, June 28, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Be my heaven...
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hazem al jaber
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Sahar Sahar (9/20/2009 12:56:00 PM)
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It is very beautiful write.......wish your dreams may get true.....
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Çaðla Dað (9/8/2009 5:16:00 AM)
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it was written by plain language..
so many people can easily find their strong feelings in your poem..
Thank you
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Lady Grace (7/2/2009 2:13:00 AM)
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a beautiful one..the thought is fine..grace
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Catrina Heart (6/28/2009 7:34:00 AM)
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they called me a lover, because i love you...
called me an adorer, because i adore you...
called me the dreamer, because i dream always about you...
the calls of love well pointed out and finely stirred through........
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rago rago (6/28/2009 5:32:00 AM)
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the poem is very very nice........and the words woven in best context.........
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****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.****** A ThOuGhT MaTe (6/28/2009 5:29:00 AM)
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a beautiful poem Hazem..can you stop loving her for one day..yes iam telling you the treatment of the girls, tell her i hate you so she can stop for a while while astonished, let her cry then say to her these sweet words..cheers...
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