Falling in a disorderly pattern, they
Vertically leap and glance
Strike the ground
Jump and dance
Quite instrumental with tick tick sound
Musical roars they enhance
Threadless freedom they enjoy
And scatter in a trance.
(06-30-09)
Your broken beads dance to a nostalgic tune. I like the phrase, 'threadless freedom'. Something a bit poignant about this one. Excellent, Sameer. Kind regards, Sandra
Nice mini movie of broken necklace. The last line is a creative way of describing the end. I like it.
a decadence of memories settled in the most respected master piece of reality....wonderful my friend...such a lovely to a dream of Tomorrow’s off dream....thank you for your poem....it is a medicine for those felt empty....a 10 +++
Beautiful poem, no strings to hold you, means a dance of joy, for threadless freedom. Bob Blackwell 10+
as i can see you are an observant , i never knew a poem could be written about necklace beads.well done Sameer
sameer, I really love it.....I can feel that music through your beautiful poem...10
and i m in trance after reading ur poem................very rhythmical and true to heart
but some beads are so precious that once come out of a broken necklace disappear forever, get out of sight and life.......... besides my feeling poem is beautiful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
youre good with words,10