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June30 Tara
(6/30/2009 2:04:00 AM) |
What a lovely tribute to the most wonderful creation of Almighty! ! !
Thanks for sharing :)
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Christopher Flynn
(6/15/2009 3:54:00 PM) |
For the love of your mother such a beautiful poem. To me it expresses the very essence of a mother, to love, protect and dream of a better future for her child.
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Lillian Thomas
(6/8/2009 11:17:00 AM) |
this is very well written, good imagery, well-constructed. These are my favorite lines:
'And weaves dreams
For me
Beyond her life.'
They have resonance beyond the words, deeper, very beautifully put. When you have an ending that strong, it lifts the whole poem to another level.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
(5/12/2009 11:06:00 PM) |
And weaves dreams
For me
Beyond her life..................A wonderful tribute by a wonderful son............
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Alison Cassidy
(5/12/2009 8:21:00 PM) |
A beautiful poem about transformation and the unconditional devotion of motherhood. The caterpillar of your today becomes the butterfly of your tomorrows. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Lynda Robson
(5/12/2009 3:39:00 PM) |
A wonderful poem for your mother on mothers day, well penned,
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Lynda xx
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Karin Anderson
(5/12/2009 2:44:00 AM) |
A wonderful title for your poem, with your continuing theme weaving your Mother's love, protection and aspirations for her beloved Sameer. 10 Karin Anderson
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Kesav Easwaran
(5/12/2009 1:02:00 AM) |
good Mother's Day poem, Sameer...i liked the sensitive attachment and affection it carries inside...10
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