hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 34,455 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Beat By Beat - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I hear music beat by beat
And wish to greet
To have new beginning and start
And make you very much part

I feel joy in spring
And wish no autumn to bring
It is story that can be re-written
But not the words eaten

Life is life and has no parallel
I feel good and excel
Yet it needs more and more
I wish I could explore

You are what you are
But not very far
Close to my heart
Completely resonated as inseparable art

Little twinkle star make me believe
You are the person to live with
I shall dream when you write
Passion may rise and really ignite

I have nothing to loose but only to win
This was reality and never had been
You are simply an object of relevance
I shall have ample time to take chance

Look back but not in despair
With confidence and make it rare
Final bid to restore with honest try
I shall be there and ready to fly

You have your schedule and name
I have simple entered and came
From nowhere to be part
Can we have golden start?


Comments about Beat By Beat by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie Nicanor P. Tiosen (8/27/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    I like the rhyme and the images your lines bring. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 34,455 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2013 9:53:00 PM)


    Traveon Jermaine less than 1 minute ago
    Very smooth (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,455 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2013 9:46:00 PM)

    I hear music beat by beat
    And wish to greet (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013


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