Beating Twice Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Beating Twice

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It is known by this time
You never missed me anytime
It was confusion on my part
You were very sincere from the start

Yes sometimes, time plays villain
It does not help to maintain
Cordial or sweet relation
But certainly you get some indication

It helps to overcome
When becomes unbearable
When you are in knee deep trouble
And that forces you to struggle

You are called human being
Very resourceful with thinking
There is way out
You are powerful enough to sort it out

Just ask one simple question
To conscious or with heart to mention
“Are you doing any injustice to anyone”?
If answer is negative then care for no one

Yes, heart is beating twice
One as normal and another with promise
That one day you will turn
With all that happiness to return

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

Reveal of inner voice krishna Middela12 minutes ago It's important introspection.nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

OK, but you could use some tips Brooke Corriher5 minutes ago You used some advanced words & everything, It just seems almost childish. Like the words were forced... very planned. Try to write more off the top of your head. To me, that always sounds more sincere. But not bad! Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago dear friend, it is never planned. idea strikes n poem is written, , poem is just end product

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 December 2013

It is known by this time You never missed me anytime

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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