Brie Carter

Rookie (March 12,1994 / Dalton)

Beautiful Disaster


She cuts her wrists so beautifully,
Right to the bone,
She does this each and every night,
When she's all alone.
No one understands her,
Not even her friends,
She has no one to talk to,
She wants it all to just end.

Her pain hides behind the smiles,
And the dark make up she wears
She feels life has no point,
And that no one cares,

She goes to sleep each night,
Praying, that tomorrow all the pain and sorrow will be gone,
Tears stream down her face,
She tries so hard to be strong

Then this one fatal night,
They find her hanging from a tree,
I think shes happy now,
because she has finally been set free from all her pain and misery.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 07, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, March 24, 2010

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  • Rookie Iron Panda 23™ (3/18/2010 7:58:00 AM)

    i LOVED it! ! !
    this was a 'beautiful disaster'! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/27/2009 10:52:00 PM)

    hey you know! ! ! ! there is a similar song by the name Beautiful disaster by Kelly Clarkson, ..
    I love her....
    this one is all cool! ! tooo... liked this one...this is very moving.. nice emotions here friend...

    with lv
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Synister <3 Addiktion [[i love casper]] (2/27/2009 1:26:00 PM)

    Wonderful Poem. This one is my favorite of all time (Report) Reply

  • Rookie B3@utiful Dis@st3r (2/20/2009 1:49:00 PM)

    wow this is deep i can really understand i've been down that road before nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madison Yeater (2/2/2009 12:36:00 PM)

    God, i love this...
    brings back a lot though, on those who have been through this pain, and sorrow. thinking one may not have anyone who cares for them. but when you look around, there is ALWAYS someone by your side.
    great job! =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Yaseen Anwer (12/15/2008 1:37:00 AM)

    very well penned! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kaci Souisa (11/21/2008 11:20:00 AM)

    a beautifuly sad poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Austin Zaratzian (11/19/2008 12:49:00 PM)

    its really good just at the end i think you should take out from all her pain and misery
    you have talent (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anonymous *plz comment! * (11/2/2008 5:40:00 PM)

    forgot to put it in my last comment, but anyone who reads it check out my recent poem Beautiful Disaster if u search it, it should come up under Caitlyn plz comment (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anonymous *plz comment! * (11/2/2008 5:34:00 PM)

    wow i love it, the title got my attention because me and my friend were thinking about writing a poem titled beautiful disaster so we both wrote our own version, hers went kind of like yours. Is this about you or someone u know? and as far as Sathyanarayana, thats what all adults think, if they don't get it, they never will. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (10/8/2008 11:50:00 AM)

    Very very sad story......really very painful.........is it true? I am worried about the teenage children's peculiar problems; why they commit suicide? You have done well in bringing this kind of sad incident to light......... (Report) Reply

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