Babatunde Aremu


Beautiful Moon - Poem by Babatunde Aremu

There are billions of stars in the sky
There are trillions of lamps on earth
None glows like the beautiful moon
At your uprise the world glows
Your appearance reveals God's glory
Your incadescent light brghtens the world
Your short monthly appearance
Reminds us that God is light
You are so constant from creation




You have no turbine
You have no connecting wire
Megawatts has no relationship with you
There is no socket on the wall
Yet you are afar glowing the world
You neither burn nor hurt
That's while some tell tales under you
Some use you as a periodical guide
Some see you as a symbol of worship
I see you as God's created beauty.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem came into being during my official tour to Bichi, Kano, Nigeria. In the night, I peeped through my window and was able to appreciate the moon better

Comments about Beautiful Moon by Babatunde Aremu

  • Bronze Star - 2,983 Points Francis Lynch (8/29/2014 9:14:00 AM)

    Nice imagery. I really don't see the similarities between our two poems. Your's is a celebration of beauty. Mine is the loss of such. Nice write, all the same. Watch the typos. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,753 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/22/2014 11:13:00 AM)

    A spiritually beautiful poem that satisfies the soul. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (6/15/2014 12:08:00 AM)

    In Bichi, Kano, Nigeria
    the moon was softly glaring
    millions more stood peering
    your thought in words keep sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,947 Points * Sunprincess * (11/18/2013 7:10:00 PM)

    I have seen photos of the supermoon, I would love to see it up close :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,406 Points Smoky Hoss (11/1/2013 7:44:00 AM)

    It is amazing to scan the cosmos, and find meaning, and mystery everywhere. This is a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,947 Points * Sunprincess * (11/25/2012 10:39:00 PM)

    a beautiful tribute to the moon..our God is truly a genius
    to create light without electricity as you mentioned..this
    is a real thought provoking write..enjoyed.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/13/2012 7:28:00 AM)

    moon as multisymbol/nice to muse on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Babalola Augustine Adeola (10/6/2012 7:24:00 AM)

    Constant form of creation indeed. Good job my ògá. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 6, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 6, 2012


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