Vidyadhara ...

Rookie - 96 Points (India)

Beauty - Poem by Vidyadhara ...

Sighting her in opposite mirror
Like a boundless poetic mirage
Finding no words I surrender
To the beauty unfolding its image

Beauty seemed lesser in lily
To compare her to lotus was silly
No simile, metaphor or metonymy
Describe her fathomless beauty aptly


Comments about Beauty by Vidyadhara ...

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (9/24/2008 3:52:00 AM)

    very beautiful indeed......and thanks for the compliments (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
    4 person did not like.
  • Rookie Kholekile Monakali (9/14/2008 2:10:00 AM)

    if you want to see beauty you will find it to nowhere but to yourself., , , , , , , ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shalini Kts (8/29/2008 11:52:00 AM)

    beauty beautifully described... short and nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 521 Points Subbaraman N V (7/23/2008 3:30:00 AM)

    Can beauty be better described! Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Moushumi moushumi (6/15/2008 11:02:00 AM)

    Hi,
    i really appreciate how ur feeling translated into this poem.i'm just trying to express my fantasy into poem & i require ur moral help to teach me how to write a poem like that of yours (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (6/13/2008 4:25:00 PM)

    Very romantic. An unforgettable moment which time cannot take from you. Thank you
    for sharing your fine art with your readers.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (5/30/2008 12:58:00 PM)

    I thought this was written too well. Sometimes, a poet,
    will reach a very great height in some lines and fall a
    little short in others. This writer has done just that.
    The form and substance of the poem is perfection.
    The greatest poems are only one or two verses in
    structure, because that is all that is required.
    He meets all the standard requirements.
    The writing was excellant but not perfect.
    I gave it a 9. Honestly, it is better than most
    tens; but because this is so good in general, its
    specific imperfection is clearer than that of most poems.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (5/26/2008 1:15:00 AM)

    Ahh but you have described her beauty aptly, a very delightful read, indeed! ! ! *10*! !
    Best regards, Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Usha Pisharody (5/21/2008 10:01:00 PM)

    Simply, lucidly, tenderly and warmly presented, the 'beauty'!
    A lovely poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (5/21/2008 5:17:00 PM)

    Tis said that 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder.' This 'beholder' certainly has shining eyes - and a tenderhearted pen too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (5/21/2008 12:52:00 PM)

    She sounds amazing, so worth the read here, thankyou! !

    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Desantis (5/21/2008 8:14:00 AM)

    wow, she must be very beautiful...nice one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Abha Sharma (5/16/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    Your lines themselves convey
    the boundless beauty of words
    without the simile metaphor n metonymy
    the fathomless beauty is conveyed…
    Abha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 270 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/16/2008 9:23:00 PM)

    Boundless poetic mirage! Well said, Vidyadhar! Since times unknown poets are after this mirage…the way you sight the beauty of your ‘her’ in this poem is really beautiful! Ten, for sure! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 16, 2008



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