Beauty Moves Poem by Adam Day
Beauty Moves
Laying in my boat
Feeling the cool mist
Yells from my love
Asking me to assist
Wandering to the helm
To take charge of the boat
She jumps out to kiss me
Like a vampire she latches throat
It’s always a surprise
Being in love with the new
So much excitement
Not sure what to do
The giggly happy princess
Dances with all her might
I sit back and wonder
If she feels alright
To cute to turn my head
I cheer and clap along
She dances the dance of dance
Crazy moves yet never in the wrong
You can’t help but smile
When you stop and glare
Her arms are freely flailing
In a fit of joy without care
Rocking the boat
Is ever much fun
Watching the dance
Underneath the sun
Beauty and grace
Is about all I can say
Your moves astound me
In every single way
a poet of amazing talent. brilliant work, kinda reminds me of james wright. keep on posting!
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4/26/2024 12:29:49 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This piece swings along Adam. You have chosen the right metre for a description of the dance beauty makes, and it flows well. The rhymes are well thought out too, I only ask you to look carefully at the piece for one or two words need editing. Spelling even a small word incorrectly seems to jump out at the reader - you will easily overcome this I am sure because you write with flair and enthusiasm. A ten from me. Besg wishes Fay.