Christina Phan

Rookie - 0 Points (May,2,1992)

Because Of You - Poem by Christina Phan

Ryan
After all
We been through
I'm sorry
I never talk to you and wait too long
My chances are over because you move on
Because of you
I feel guilty
You were happy and smiling
Because of me
I wish I can go back to that day and make it right with you
To show you that I'm a different girl that you would have date, talk to you and give you a chance
I'm sorry
I hope you are doing ok
I wonder how your life is going
Now I play on safe side, so I don't get hurt
Because of you
I can't get back on my feet
How am I suppose to move on
I know that you are sad on inside
You probably think I was the one for you, but
Now it's too late because you are dating someone else
What is the point of even trying to get you back, prove to you that I won’t do it again, and
Give us one more chance to do it again
I think we are better off not dating
You need to trust me on this
I cause you a lot of pain already
Now it’s time to go our separate ways and no looking back
We need to forget the past and each other
Because of you
I can't be myself anymore
Because of you


Comments about Because Of You by Christina Phan

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aqeb Benazir (7/29/2011 4:33:00 PM)

    amazing story and context! ! ! this would make a hit song; -) really nice flow!
    10/10! ! congratz! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 102 Points Abdallah Gamal (7/23/2011 11:58:00 PM)

    It's aweso0o0o0o0me, , ur way in telling us this story is really touching, , nice poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sai Saketh (3/21/2010 3:07:00 AM)

    Very Nice. Its like you are telling a story and i got so much involved in it. Sad it is though. Good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christian Crisostomo (11/27/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    this is great.. i can feel the sadness. keep on writing.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,539 Points Marieta Maglas (9/5/2009 6:04:00 AM)

    nice abstract poem....touching................10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melissia Ann Senter (7/31/2009 12:27:00 AM)

    A Very sad write with many emotions sweetie Have you ever heard the Song Because Of you By Reba and Kelly Clarkson it is a very good song Great write My friend Melissia Ann (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nangula Immanuel (7/26/2009 5:23:00 PM)

    WOW! love this poem, i relate to it too. Each line shows more and more emotion. Powerful stuff! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2009 9:28:00 PM)

    I feel guilty
    You were happy
    Because of me
    I wish I can take back that day
    ... i still miss u and weep some time that is what is attachment... lovley phan u r more than poetess dear....10

    read mine bidding farewell.... mary to marry and you go along (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (6/25/2009 2:52:00 PM)

    Christina, your hearts words are so touching...each line inked with your regret for this love....I hope he gets to read this...tenderly penned hearts share (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Suicidal Magic (6/25/2009 12:01:00 AM)

    i can so relate to this pain...10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (6/20/2009 6:22:00 AM)

    a sad poem about pain and the hope of getting out of it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (6/18/2009 8:48:00 PM)

    this is very touching... i like it.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/16/2009 12:55:00 AM)

    because of you, i never stay too far from the sidewalk..i remember a song..this is a good poem..nicely done..grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nizamettin Esen Haymanali (6/10/2009 4:17:00 PM)

    That's touching, it reminders of my own. 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 4, 2013


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