Before Poetry- Haiku Poem by Brian Mayo

Before Poetry- Haiku

Rating: 5.0


before poetry
or any living creature,
water crashed on rocks

Friday, October 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,ocean,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 24 October 2015

Beautifully expressed and written.

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Dimitrios Galanis 25 January 2016

Oh yes it's a great poem.Before poetry by its ancient greek meaning even exixting things, since they were not percieved by other rational creatures to give theem a name, we can say they were existing.Existance for whom For the Vaquum? Existance not percieved by mind is still existance?

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Dimitrios Galanis 26 December 2015

Oh, yes natural things go their own way, we can not deviate their track.

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Simone Inez Harriman 23 November 2015

Lovely sharp image as the mind flashes back in time...10

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Pamela Sinicrope 26 October 2015

Before Brian SENRYU Before Brian Came Haikus were mostly the same Now there’s more vowels!

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Brian Mayo 26 October 2015

A, E, I, O, U and what the heck's a senryu? I can't pronounce it. :)

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Neran Sati 25 October 2015

Wow! awesome haiku, Brian. How miniature is any our activity contrasting the whole life, and the life in face of physical universe. Yet, poetry is joining it all.. even giving a soul!

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