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Before The Rain

Blue is taken by the expectant rain
And given clothes of silver
I await the cleansing
Knowing soon I will not miss her
I am cold
In solidarity with the wanting earth
Wanting this steel grey day,
Relief will soon be ours
But for now
We wait
Together

Submitted: Tuesday, May 08, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, May 09, 2012


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  • Kasia Fedyk (5/15/2012 7:32:00 PM)

    Simon, very beautiful and touching, its pure soul expression.

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  • Valerie Dohren (5/13/2012 7:54:00 AM)

    Very imaginative - you may like to read mine entitled After The Rain.

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  • Unwritten Soul (5/12/2012 11:02:00 AM)

    It is not like what i imagine when i first read the title, but it still beautiful
    it has a nice depth of meaning, beautiful shot screen
    (and i see you eat noodles...must be hungry waiting for the rain huh hahaha joking!)
    Keep writing_Unwritten Soul

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  • Saadat Tahir (5/8/2012 5:16:00 AM)

    beautiful imaginative lines...allegorical and well crafted.
    liked yer lines mate

    be happy

    :)

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