Oh beloved! sun is going to set.
Why have you not returned yet?
The eyes weep every moment,
The border of eyes is fully wet.
Eyes are thirsty of your glance,
For long time you have not met.
I was glad hearing foot's sound,
not founding you became upset.
I am imprisoned in love's cage,
Unfortunately there is no outlet.
May Your beloved has forgotten,
Mehtab also you should forget.
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I loved this, it has a mixture of feelings, of sad, love, hope and complex human things...you write it simple, beautiful...keep writing more of nice poems! .
I know that it is not so easy to bring that traditional flavour when you write a ghazal in English. I, therefore, congratulate you on this remarkable feat.
Oh beloved! sun is going to set. Why have you not returned yet? @@@ This lovely ghazal in English carries the beauty of a tradition Persian and Urdu ghazal for which I sincerely thank the Poet Mehtab Gulzar Mehtab.
in fact i'm very thankful to u as u have appreciated my this poem and encouraged me to write more poems in this type.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Amazing one my dear brother carry on