Beloved's Wait. Poem by Advocate Mehtab Gulzar @ J & K High Court at Jammu Mehtab

Beloved's Wait.

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Oh beloved! sun is going to set.
Why have you not returned yet?

The eyes weep every moment,
The border of eyes is fully wet.

Eyes are thirsty of your glance,
For long time you have not met.

I was glad hearing foot's sound,
not founding you became upset.


I am imprisoned in love's cage,
Unfortunately there is no outlet.

May Your beloved has forgotten,
Mehtab also you should forget.

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Umer noorani 22 April 2018

Amazing one my dear brother carry on

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Thank u #unwritten soul

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Unwritten Soul 09 July 2017

I loved this, it has a mixture of feelings, of sad, love, hope and complex human things...you write it simple, beautiful...keep writing more of nice poems! .

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Thanks sir #Rajnish Manga

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thanks so much

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Rajnish Manga 10 May 2017

I know that it is not so easy to bring that traditional flavour when you write a ghazal in English. I, therefore, congratulate you on this remarkable feat.

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Rajnish Manga 10 May 2017

Oh beloved! sun is going to set. Why have you not returned yet? @@@ This lovely ghazal in English carries the beauty of a tradition Persian and Urdu ghazal for which I sincerely thank the Poet Mehtab Gulzar Mehtab.

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in fact i'm very thankful to u as u have appreciated my this poem and encouraged me to write more poems in this type.

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Advocate Mehtab Gulzar @ J & K High Court at Jammu Mehtab

Advocate Mehtab Gulzar @ J & K High Court at Jammu Mehtab

R/o Sagrawet, Tehsil Darhal, District Rajouri and State J&k, India
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