Beneath The Surface Of The Ocean Poem by Hiba Yousif MNSR

Beneath The Surface Of The Ocean

Rating: 4.8


What they claim to be innocent creatures,
have the most horrendous of all features,
they are dull in color and colossal in size,
and they feed you the most terrible lies.

Their enemies the bewitching mermaids,
that have tails made of ace of blades,
they are protected by fish brigades,
that survive for centuries and decades.

While most mermaids are pure, some are damaged sirens,
they live in the deepest, darkest and dullest environs,
trying to find evil ways to overthrow the innocent pure,
by selling them poison disguised as a powerful cure.

Sunday, June 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,evil,magic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aisha Shata Mns-r 19 June 2016

Amazing job Hiba, honestly one of the best poems I have ever read. Keep up the good work.

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Aisha Shata Mns-r 19 June 2016

Amazing job Hiba, honestly on of the best poems I have ever read Keep up the good work.

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Soha Zidan 20 September 2016

It seems you've passed through a tough experience to write a poem as harsh as this one. Job well done.

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Hiba Yousif Mns-r 21 June 2016

Thank you so much umm Kulsum and Aisha

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Umm-kulsum Ashraf 21 June 2016

Wonderful poem! Great choices of words.10/10!

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Hiba Yousif Mns-r 19 June 2016

Thank you Mohammed Asim Nehal

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M Asim Nehal 19 June 2016

Excellent poem.............10

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