Beneath The Waves Poem by John Ilima

Beneath The Waves

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In perfect disharmony, so seemed me
In the sparkle of moonlight tho'
Nature seemed so serene
Yet gazing at the ebb
The flow is so tempting
Then at once, down the Nile
My passion swims
And now
Beneath the waves
Drifts her ring
Beneath the waves
Sails her bouquet
And beneath the waves
Crumbles the eternal promise

O beautiful diamond of Cape
Shall I e'er find thee gleaming
Where you're rightfully meant to be
Beneath the waves not

How delightful not
That you shalt stay afloat
Beneath the waves
Thy fragrance meeting her nose never
O wonderful roses of Elma!
Or shalt you my solemn words
Beneath the waves
E'er kiss her ears
And resound for e'er in her soul
But unto the guardians of the Mediterranean
When this Valentine Symphony does dock
Let the Goddess smile
Beneath the Waves

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is based on an unpleasant experience I faced on Valentines Day (2014) . I had planned for a surprise engagement to my girl friend on this day in Kampala Uganda, only to be disappointed to find out that evening that she was secretly having a date with another guy.When I called her several times without any response, I was terribly disappointed and decided to travel to Gulu, another city in Northern Uganda where I work. It was then around midnight EAT. I had some gifts for her including an engagement ring, but on reaching the Karuma Bridge on the River Nile, I felt the impulse to dispose them off the Nile. I alighted and did that exactly. On reaching Gulu, I got an instinct to draft a poem on this, and here I am.
I dedicate it to my friend Ritah Kiyai.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 17 February 2014

woven it very fine, veiling the sadness in imagery, great write.

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