Syed Peerzada Aurangzeb


Betrayed


Burned ashes of my dreams
Collapsed glaciers of snow white
Eyes remained alive
Whereas the soul scratched by the gentle hands
Betrayed.

Submitted: Sunday, November 18, 2012

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  • Freshman - 1,007 Points Unwritten Soul (12/24/2012 11:36:00 PM)

    I like the effect of the ashes and the snow..contrast that deeply meaningful as both are the hard challenge to face..the betrayer, dark and white...how to guess_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Bright Morn (11/23/2012 9:14:00 AM)

    soul scratched by gentle hands, great lines, very good poem. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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