Betrayed Poem by Syed Peerzada Aurangzeb

Betrayed

Rating: 5.0


Burned ashes of my dreams
Collapsed glaciers of snow white
Eyes remained alive
Whereas the soul scratched by the gentle hands
Betrayed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 24 December 2012

I like the effect of the ashes and the snow..contrast that deeply meaningful as both are the hard challenge to face..the betrayer, dark and white...how to guess_Soul

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Bright Morn 23 November 2012

soul scratched by gentle hands, great lines, very good poem. thanks for sharing

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