Syed Peerzada Aurangzeb


Betrayed - Poem by Syed Peerzada Aurangzeb

Burned ashes of my dreams
Collapsed glaciers of snow white
Eyes remained alive
Whereas the soul scratched by the gentle hands
Betrayed.


Comments about Betrayed by Syed Peerzada Aurangzeb

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (12/24/2012 11:36:00 PM)

    I like the effect of the ashes and the snow..contrast that deeply meaningful as both are the hard challenge to face..the betrayer, dark and white...how to guess_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 78 Points Bright Morn (11/23/2012 9:14:00 AM)

    soul scratched by gentle hands, great lines, very good poem. thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 18, 2012



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