Betrayl Poem by Silver Akira

Betrayl

Rating: 4.3


I see it now all so clearly,
Again I have been lied to,
But instead of crying so much like I want to,
I run into the forest where I feel at home,
The night calls to me,
And a small breeze caresses my face,
I close my eyes,
And all my memories of you flash through my mind,
A single tear slides down my cheek,
Landing on the soft ground below my feet,
I am calm and collected unusual for something this big,
My parents are out,
And I am alone,
But that's ok I need to think about your sudden betrayl,
I thought you could do no wrong but,
Look what you did,
I can't even walk away unscathed,
Even now I am losing another piece of myself,
I stand still your words of pain haunting my very thoughts,
The more I think,
The worse it gets,
Around me I can hear the animals of the forest,
Softly making sounds as if afraid of me...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Natalie Olivia 05 January 2014

Very sad, you can feel the hurt. I liked this line Even now I am losing another piece of myself, I stand still your words of pain haunting my very thoughts, well done

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Elya Thorn 05 February 2006

Such a beautiful writing, and strong, powerfull in the feeling it expresses, I had to give it a 10! well done! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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