Better Than Dream Poem by allan macli borges

Better Than Dream

Rating: 5.0


Wake up for reality is calling
Better than dream colors are blowing

Swords of the sun tearing the sky above
To rest on a dew dropp in a petal of a rose

Rushing with tenderness and true love
What offers the dreams that reality does not?

Roads to run! Rivers to swim!
Strong colors, fantastic beings

Just look to see: there it is. And here!
Wake! Wake! Wake up to fly

Here you are what you want to be
To touch the sky, just come with me

I’ll take you to my paradise;
We’re born to be free! Free!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

What offers the dreams that reality does not? Rachel Ann Butler

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Sathyanarayana M V S 11 February 2009

I see a very positive attitude Allan. Very wwell structured sweet sounding poem

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 February 2009

Beautiful poem with wonderful imagery and good rhyme and rhythm. Life is better than dream anyway........10/10. Best Wishes naseer

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