one man wanted my heart
the other made it bleed
one man made me smile
the other made me plead
one took me for granted
while the other was fair
one man kept me crying
the other really cared
one man hurt me badly
the other made me blue
one left me in april
the other left in june
I hope the men didnt return for Xmas and happy new year. the piece makes me wish to see the other men who wanted/prayed for your bliss and who stayed by you in june... thanx Liz for the suspence, i hope i will hang to death softly.
at last a love poem not filled with despair unhappiness gloom just a lovely trip with bouncing eyes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is wonderful. You balanced tragedy and humor very effectively.