Big Mistake! Poem by Sandra Feldman

Big Mistake!

Rating: 4.8

The present World
Of Rats and Men
Often coincide,
Most are proud
Of what they've
Got, to hide...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2023

ONE: indeed, so true, rat, pied piper, rat test! You have summarized the Great Truth and nothing but The Truth

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2023

TWO: The honest words in your poems are all resounding truths, and all lies are crushed in the face of truth.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2023

THREE: Only 6 lines, but there are hidden greatest truths about our society.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2023

FOUR: Dear Sandra, you are one of the few poets on this site who consistently writes of the utmost dishonesty, corruption, and injustice.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2023

FIVE: Each time I thoroughly enjoyed your honest brilliant poems,

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Khairul Ahsan 25 July 2023

Yes, it's a big mistake to be in the rat race, first of all.

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Nabakishore Dash 24 July 2023

Rat race of man and ego are the features of present world. Nice poem I enjoyed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 July 2023

Please, dear PoemHunter, WHERE are my responses here? So long have I to wait to be able to read my support for dear Sandra.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 July 2023

Amen to that Sister Bravo! ! ! !

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Jayne Louise Davies 24 July 2023

Well said Sandra x Thanks for sharing.

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