cold grief or demented vacuum?
grey head in coffin
suicide neck
drunken sorry note (with misspellings)
something nice about everyone (i love you)
debts owed to companies (many thousands)
punk kids from the other marriage (haircuts at the wake)
martyrdom of dust and tedious fear
ordinary con job
with thank you notes and symmetry
(the wife who found his body)
Graphic, very strong, and honest. You put it all together in these lines as matter-of-factly as possible, for suicides always cause a disruption of emotions and thoughts. (My brother did it and I wrote 'Frankie' for him.) 10+
drunken sorry note (with misspellings) hehe like that stuff when details come out like that nice shet: }
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ah, so sad, A friend of yours? Well expressed and a good job. Read mine - Eternal Grief - Adeline