~ Biopsychic ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Biopsychic ~

Rating: 4.4


~ BIOPSYCHIC ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK.
27 February 26,2010

[Humble submission: BIOSPYCHIC … not used in textual concept…word coupling Biopsy + Psychic = Biopsychic…careful reading will make it clear.~ niv]

Floating silvery clouds
Vocalize vibe in me
Fragranced rummy zephyr
Flutter booze bosom
Youngish splurge spring
Ooohing nerve tentacles
Azure sky oozing smile
Concert of fragrance.

Everything seen
Appears matchless
Tumultuous blood
Horripilate embrace
Why me?

Biopsychic ~ Omigod!
‘Tis Lovesickness
Metastasized in
Allness and fullness.

O’ My Beau
I’m incurably yours
In union separation
In dilemma of
Yes no
Swing deswing of
Hope despair.

Sitting face to face
Eyes on eyes
Souls soaked sloshed
Rill romance minstrel
Overflowing silent tryst
Under canopy cajole
Why not
Indulge in lofty leisure?

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kolawole Ajao 14 April 2010

Unless we read BIOPSYCHIC We may dwindle in irrelevance Read, read and read... Till the poem BIOPSYCHIC Psyches you up!

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Katang Chakravorty 16 April 2010

Well cooked romantic poem all matchless ingredients of pure emotions Amazing description with gleaming metaphors Last 8 lines a canvas of yearning for cozy warmth of togetherness ‘Under canopy cajole’ with ‘Indulge in lofty leisure’ 10+++

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Seema Chowdhury 19 April 2010

hi Niv, this is a very different poem, and yes we need to read it carefully to understand the underline meanings.thanks for sharing.

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Lynn Glover 18 May 2010

As I disregard biopsychic, since I have never heard that word before, and carefully read through the poem I see your love side seeping through. A very good poem and I rate it a 20+ Your friend Lynn

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Denis Mair 13 July 2017

Who are you and how do you appear among us stewing such panspermic nosegays? Here we have a splayed-out anthem, a guided tour of an aroused sensorium, a feelie in 6-D smellovision. Galloping neuro-plasticity overflows banks that never were. You tell of solace enjoyed in a divine creche (as you put it in another poem) . Strange paradox of canopied embowerment and lofty expansion.

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Denis Mair 13 July 2017

I just realized something: among the abundant fruits you offer are these wonderful comments. Your force field has gathered around you such a wonderful chorus of responses that I am jealous of their lively mindedness. The voices are so sincere they almost sound cherubic, paradoxically brought out by your prurient content. You have obviously touched a nerve, and the people show their poet-hood by reacting to you so variously. I think it will repay my effort to read all the comments under this poem.

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Cat Tiger 05 May 2012

Question for you, my dear Niv. Do you express yourself emotionally better in English or in your native tongue?

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Cristobal Obregon 11 December 2010

This is a good allegorical poem that really takes you to the heart of love, and out,

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2010

nice interlink between antonyms....lovely to read, especially that I like your style so much...Mari

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Ramesh T A 01 September 2010

Who can stop love indulgence in lofty leisure? No one indeed!

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