howard simon

Such a new and lovely way to say happy birthday, really like it.

Wow! I wish every day was my birthday so that I could read this poem every day. Beautiful!

'The sun got out of bed,
swam across the ocean
just to shine on you today.'

It made me smile, thank you.

I really love the repetitive nature of this poem. It seems to bring me right into the poem, as should happen when a good poet writes. The way you have used nature to pep up the reader is unbelievable and I really enjoyed it. Great write. Lynn

Excellent descriptive poem about nature, nice personifications, lovely to read
10/10/10

A wonderful poem.. nice birthday wish! ! ! !

Cant believe you didnt add this for me to look at....loved your direction...please read my birthday song, i think you may like it :)

your poems are the best
when you right i can see what your writing
when i read this it brought me everlasting joy

You made very nice use of figures of speech. I more often than not enjoy such writing. Short, as I prefer, and skillful. The repetition of ''You today'' was the only mark of defect to me.

awww that soo sweet and just like scarlet it reminds me of spring