Birthday Note Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Birthday Note

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Birthday Note

Chirasree


Days may pass soon
and you shall see the hot noon
the evening may seem pleasant
and there shall be the cool moon

so the life shall witness
and may bring the smile on the face
this is how you shall mushroom
and also witness the blossom

life is to be enjoyed
and same way faced too
it may grant pleasure
with difficult tenure too

the day and date has to be spent with friends
but this not an end
remember one year has been reduced from your lifespan
still, go ahead with the plan as you want

with the flicker of time, you shall knock an old age
you go back to all old pages
and evaluate what all you did to succeed
plug all loopholes if you feel it is needed

HasmukhAmathalal Mehta

Birthday Note
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with the flicker of time, you shall knock an old age you go back to all old pages and evaluate what all you did to succeed plug all loopholes if you feel it is needed Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

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Deepak Kotadia Deepak Kotadia Nice thought, nice lines. 1 Manage Like · Reply ·

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thank you Hasmukh Sir for such a lovely and wise poem. It means a lot :) Chirasree Bose, Hyderabad, May 29,2018

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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