***birthday Wish*** Poem by Queeny Gona

***birthday Wish***

Rating: 3.5


On a fine morning, by the side of a shore:
You shine like a bright sun.
On a fine evening,
You bloom as a jasmine: spreading your lovely fragrance to all.
You lit our hearts,
With your pretty smiles.
Every time you touch upon our souls:
With your cheerful presence.
These are the times,
You make us feel proud, to have you as a friend!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Such a wonderful gift in your wish of your birthday. a touch in a heart feels in your poem

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Queeny Gona 29 January 2017

I am honoured. Thank you for the read and comment dear poet.

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A sincere and passionate birthday wish that bears definitely the fragrance of jasmine and beauty of blooming rose....10

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Sarah Shahzad 27 January 2020

such a beautiful work here.. such a lovely poem, i like it.. thanks for sharing..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 January 2020

A very heartwarming write. I am sure your friend will treasure this wonderful poem. A beautiful wish and a tribute. so lovingly penned.

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Queeny Gona 09 January 2020

Thank you ma'am for your beautiful comment.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 May 2017

What a beautiful wish on a friend's birthday. Your friend must be elated n proud to receive such a lovely token of love, warmth n tenderness. A 10.

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Queeny Gona 24 May 2017

Thank you for the read and comment dear Ma'am. I am happy to see your ratings on my work!

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Chinedu Dike 17 January 2017

Beautiful rendition of 'sweet words'. Lovely poem elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Queeny.

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Queeny Gona 29 January 2017

Thank you Sir.Pleasure is mine to see you comment on my muse.

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