If I have given a wish!
I would fly high in the sky.
Not just for the joy of flying,
Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
Drag their masks out of their faces.
Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
To build a cheaters free society.
Your focus on social concerns and also on the hypocrisy of people is commendable. Thanks. Following lines say it eloquently: Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature; But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
huh huh, nice wish! ! if cheaters know the reason why you are flying they'll pull you down... nice thought!
Dear Queeny You may be able to fly, sky high, enjoy the nature But to remove the hypocrites from this world, impossible. Appreciate your wish to remove those elements from the world. Good writing Thanks for sharing Nooruddeen
You're absolutely awesome with words. This piece wonderful lines. :)
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A poignant bit of verse elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Queeny.
You have a glorious and beautiful reason to fly high. Remain flying. Remain high. Remain blessed Queeny. Beautifully conversing poem 10/10
Having ambition in life is great. Such desire motivates mind and allows a person to grow much. Revisiting this poem I feel glad really.
Surely, I too had that wish! Wanting to be superheroes-hero! Glad that you too had such wish! Thanks for sharing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Quenny, My comment is much like Valsa George that we believe in your conviction and search for truth and justice. Saying out of their faces means that it was a part of their face which is also true and the permanent sheep's clothing that the leopards have is simply ripped out. Very strong and dynamic language. Thank you for your revolutionary comments. From an old Woodstock Hippy Paul