Queeny Gona

Bronze Star - 2,690 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

My Wish To Fly - Poem by Queeny Gona

If I have given a wish!
I would fly high in the sky.
Not just for the joy of flying,
Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
Drag their masks out of their faces.
Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
To build a cheaters free society.


Comments about My Wish To Fly by Queeny Gona

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (11/26/2016 1:22:00 AM)


    Loaded with lovely longings for a laudable life of both truth and transparency. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Rekha Padinjattakathu (7/7/2016 3:46:00 AM)


    remove the sheep cloth out of leopards - great expression! Nice poem! Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/21/2016 4:10:00 AM)


    To dream along with the joy of your heart! With hope and faith. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • (10/22/2015 10:03:00 AM)


    Very commendable desire but quite difficult to accomplish. As a poem it is enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. Ten points. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/22/2015 9:21:00 AM)


    The poem shows your commitment to remove all ills afflicting the society. Amazing poem. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/22/2015 4:48:00 AM)


    Dreams are part of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/22/2015 1:07:00 AM)


    Nice thought.Wish I could fly with you. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (9/9/2015 9:53:00 PM)


    Your focus on social concerns and also on the hypocrisy of people is commendable. Thanks. Following lines say it eloquently:
    Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
    But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
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  • Paul Amrod (9/9/2015 5:45:00 PM)


    Hi Quenny, My comment is much like Valsa George that we believe in your conviction and search for truth and justice.
    Saying out of their faces means that it was a part of their face which is also true and the permanent sheep's clothing that the leopards have is simply ripped out. Very strong and dynamic language. Thank you for your revolutionary comments. From an old Woodstock Hippy Paul
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/9/2015 3:00:00 PM)


    o trace the hypocrites in the society
    And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
    Drag their masks out of their faces.
    Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
    To build a cheaters free society. this is a great vision my dear Poetess. if you can fly..so high, please do it. let your dream come true dear. thank you
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  • Ging Taping (8/3/2015 12:50:00 AM)


    This is also my wish to flyhigh into the sky..to relax away from work and just glide with the clouds.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (6/15/2015 1:06:00 PM)


    You have high ideals and high spirits.Nice penning dear Queeny. (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2015 2:55:00 AM)


    This is my wish, too. A well-crafted piece of art dear.10/10... (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (5/29/2015 7:14:00 AM)


    Beyond the innocent whim to fly in the sky for joy, you have much more serious objectives..... like creating a world free of swindlers and hypocrites! A poem charged with idealism! (Report) Reply

  • (5/11/2015 8:19:00 AM)


    Good poem, flows well. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/4/2010 9:31:00 AM)


    If I have three thumbs they will surely be up... Penned very well here as in penned very well! (Report) Reply

  • (5/22/2010 6:06:00 AM)


    dear Gona, i believe you are an idealist and patriotic... and salute to you and your attitude.. good short one.. loved it... (Report) Reply

  • (5/19/2010 4:10:00 AM)


    'remove the sheep cloth out of leopards'

    I like the formate.
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  • (11/4/2009 11:08:00 AM)


    ' I would fly high in the sky'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (10/31/2009 7:58:00 AM)


    you have a theme a message there and a courageous voice to raise! i liked the vision inside your write Queeny...good piece...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013


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