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Midnights Voice

(November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Biting Into The Lightning Bolt Of Love


If I am crazy, then
My eyes are heavy, and
I'm drunken in your
Fireballs bursting in air
That come spiraling in

Confuse me now I'm crazy, and
Could you make it, then
Come on in till I am dead?
Oh! my eyes are heavy
Oh! because you have a whole lot of love to give

Did I make a mistake, and
Did the sky make a hole for love to give? Then
Don't break yet
I'm falling into your clouds
And the storm is about to begin

Don't break me yet, now
I am biting into your lightning bolt of love, and
The pain has me tingling
And you say, 'Whoa, I have a whole
Lot more of loving to give.'

Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2013

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  • Ken E Hall (11/27/2013 6:19:00 AM)

    The poem itself is a lightning bolt of doing it your way of writing which is a pleasure to read this whole lot of love going on and happy go lovely...regards (Report) Reply

  • Whisperkwane Lamb (2/10/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    How powerful one is within his own heart...love...love...love march forward like the post person rain, snow nor bolt shall keep me...true that...years of misunderstanding for just one something understood...what good...my brother...you have did much good...your words rang out...like the shout they are...thanks sir...once again.... (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (1/24/2013 10:58:00 AM)

    impressive one.lot of similes are used to hide a sincere love behind words.the title is really supperb.~nb (Report) Reply

  • Vivek Tiwari (1/24/2013 5:43:00 AM)

    Great love for Nature. If we really love nature with the idea you expressed in your poem we may be able to preserve our natural heritage. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (1/22/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    Electrifying - a poem guaranteed to knock the readers' collective socks off! (Report) Reply

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