Blank Page Poem by Ames Sunshine
Blank Page
The page is clear
The sheet is blank
it's just waiting to be written on
What will I write
What will I feel
What will I be willing to reveal
Emotions, emotions
depressed, happy or sad.
maybe even violent, mad, or glad.
What will the ink show
Will it just easily flow
The world will never be sure to know
This will probably never be shared
because hardly anyone would care
Who would want to read this page
and to my innermost thoughts be engaged
You never know what will in the end come out
No one knows what the conclusion to the story will be about
Everyday is a blank page
How are you filling your canvas?
I hope mine are filled with smiles and inspiration
and I hope that every page will be a joyous occasion
I wonder when my last page will be
and what I'll write about
I wonder what final last emotions will come out.
i realy loooooove it ur so honest i love that keep going best wishes with blue roses crystal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/9/2024 12:41:58 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Heyo. I've read two of your poems in total, and I feel that they're both really nice! I liked this one better though, thus I choose to leave my comment here. Firstly, I like your title. Hahs. 'Blank page' is an intriguing title, and i think that if I was actually choosing a poem from the list of poem titles, it would prove to be a much more captivating choice. This title gives a mysterious and unknown atmosphere to the poem that makes me want to read it. Also, I had rather liked the line in this poem that went: 'Everyday is a blank page How are you filling your canvas? ' It gives an added emotional feel to top up the poem. It's also a beautiful line, that expresses a feel even without a speaker. Like it lotts. Some ways in which you could improve would be perhaps trying to change your phrasing of the words so that it dosent occasionally lapse into the style of lyrics. Other than that, I would say that you're not bad, not bad at all, buddy. Hope you continue writing and contribute your beautiful phrases for the world to enjoy!