Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 3 Points (Singapore)

Blasphemy - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Forbidden garden were planted with black roses
Emitting smells of long gone corpses
Abandoned for purity
Extricated from beneath of sunken earth
The soils were crumpling and humid
Turning it into after burnt colors
Trespassers wouldn’t take a second look
To determine what’s left for Hell
Is not left for Heaven
The brooding and legitimate darkness
Of impurities will soon
Breeds the seeds of Satan impersonating priests
All Hell breaks loose
Somebody with empowerment and virgin
Have to seal the floodgate
Children’s of the damned are crusading
An army of bona fide blasphemies
Exorcising the wicket link
Pathfinders will soon start
Surveying the pinnacles
The annihilation of the world


Comments about Blasphemy by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (8/27/2009 2:49:00 PM)

    an angry poem! I liked the content! ! !
    Forbidden garden were planted with black roses
    Emitting smells of long gone corpses-----> you chose the suitable words

    100% right... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Roland Bastien (4/19/2008 12:58:00 AM)

    All Hell breaks loose
    Somebody with empowerment and virgin
    Have to seal the floodgate
    ---------------
    he already unlocked the west side paradise door
    souls from the transmigrated land paced into the land
    a bright light arised (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Francisco R. Albano (4/7/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    Striking imagery. Correct the grammatical mistakes and it gets a 10!
    Is English your first language? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aine Ní Leidhin (3/13/2008 5:55:00 PM)

    Ideology’s desire to make its own canon and perspective the only acceptable choice results in intolerance and persecution as all other perspectives are denounced as heretical or perhaps even evil.
    Kind regards
    Aine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Not The Pilot (3/11/2008 8:34:00 PM)

    i really like the words used. i see it.... good job... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Konye obaji Ori (3/8/2008 6:27:00 AM)

    this is a very celestial poem, i think.....it has powerful diction, tone and apt imagery...so beautifully writen....i read it over and over and i loved it, a lot...Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ngaio beck (3/3/2008 11:12:00 PM)

    More prophecy than poetry.You've certainly 'got it right'.
    Salaam! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rajagopal h (3/1/2008 8:34:00 PM)

    i can understand the agony of the current scenario of spiritualism devoid of love and divinity....great piece (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 7, 2011


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