Aranthabailu Ummar

Blessed - Poem by Aranthabailu Ummar

Expand my chest I got a breath
A rose protruding in it
Let me say goodby to my lonliness

My mind a weaving mechine for many years
The mill run weaving sad and misery
The thread came out hard and untouched

As a weed in paddy field
As a tendril in mango hill
As a creaper in arreca plantation I was alone

Blue sky of shy and twinkling star
Brings dream to darken my room
Moon very cool breaks my fear of discourage

Merry night and twinkling sky
sparks the ocean hot to its woumb
waves wings slaps me to enter into a strong bond

Sea witnessed my love, abonding lonliness
cool and hot blood mixed up in my veins
To be ever with her warming chest bounded by her arms

Comments about Blessed by Aranthabailu Ummar

  • Gold Star - 24,593 Points Liza Sud Russia (9/27/2015 7:10:00 AM)

    genius - so vivid description! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 26,789 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/17/2015 3:57:00 AM)

    As a weed in paddy field
    As a tendril in mango hill
    As a creaper in arreca plantation I was alone

    The expression of the loneliness is well expressed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,722 Points Hazel Durham (8/8/2015 10:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful write with amazing imagery, thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,260 Points Bharati Nayak (7/28/2015 12:02:00 AM)

    Yes, bid good bye to loneliness as you are expanding. Nice write.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,519 Points Marieta Maglas (9/3/2012 4:33:00 PM)

    well expressed poem, thank you for sharing.......... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,154 Points Seema Chowdhury (9/8/2011 10:50:00 AM)

    A nice and a heartfelt write, (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,521 Points Unwritten Soul (9/4/2011 7:27:00 AM)

    You are blessed by this great talent, you are blessed to have that gifts...yet dont cry for something you not reach yet, one day a sand will turn gold coz your heart is not just a flesh but it a place for sweet soul..rise Aranthabailu and i like this poem very much, smile_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,154 Points Seema Chowdhury (1/31/2011 9:42:00 AM)

    very nice and beautiful thought penned down.
    deep and reflective poem./thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Suja Nair (11/12/2010 6:39:00 AM)

    Nice poem, I like it keep writing your thoughts..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 24, 2010

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