Blissful Night Poem by Loco luvr

Blissful Night



Thinking such a moment in my life wud be,
fortunate, bright, alive and full of glee,
lips smiling, eyes shining, soul worry free
starry sky, full moon, pleasent breeze, u and me!


lost in each other, holding u in my arms,
twinkling stars, few clouds, nature with all its charms,
fluttering hearts, sizzling lips, sweet desires tossing inside,
Tempting sighs, breaths in sync, fondling hands, feel so right!



I caress ur face, u smile and look in my eyes,
the moment stills, i forget to breath when i kiss u light.
i see a falling star in the vastness of skies,
and make this wish, may never end this blissful night! !
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 March 2008

you have got all the ingredients...........of infinite nights...........

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Loco Luvr 22 March 2008

thank you Jasmine and Vidyadhar!

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Jasmine Margetson 19 March 2008

i love this.they way u describe it with short words but it paints such a vivid picture.veri kool

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 March 2008

nice way to express our feelings..........good to read

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