Bloodlust Transformation {to Vampire} Poem by Jessica Robert

Bloodlust Transformation {to Vampire}

Rating: 5.0


My heart, no longer pumping me with blood
Is silence, forever with no beats
My skin transforming,
Pale white and ice cold
My face is beautifying
With an extreme beauty of thos only of a monster
Used to pull in its prey
My eyes are piercing with the color of bright wine
The leftover of what I was before
I feel strong
I feel powerful
And in the back of my throat,
I am burning with bloodlust
Oxygen is no longer necessary to fill my lungs
Yet, its a sensation
As I breath deeply in and exhale deeply out
I notice a scent that sends me wild
The smell is tempting
And absolutely mind-blowing
I want it
I forget everything around me, like it never had existed in the beginning
I turn to the smell
A youngling watching my wild eyes
My target locks as I crouch
My teeth bares and my mind is set
I pounce
The last look on my prey was one of fear
And in its pool of blood, that cloaks me in a darkened red
I see the animal I have become

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
aaliyah 22 January 2019

can somene point out all the figurative language used in this poem plz

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Velvet Bloodlust 22 July 2012

Brilliant!           

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Marina Gasbey 27 July 2010

Now that is a real vampire! You spared no expense in making a bloodthirsty character! Eerie indeed! I loved it! ... Mariana Gasbey....

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Saadat Tahir 03 July 2009

dark dreary and pungent...yet captures your attention...read iot with rapt attention almost in awe and anticipation lest i make a noise and shoo away the rampaging beast very well written cheers

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