Black Sun Poem by Jessica Robert
Black Sun
The world is changing
Nothing is the same
Your love is gone with the wind
And my life is less meaningful
With you, my heart use to glow like the sun
Illuminating orange and yellow
But as you spoke those words
My heart darkened
The sun died, turning it black
No light, No power
I completely shut down
You are gone, I am nothing
I lost myself in you, your love carried me far
Far away from where I am use to
And now I am lost
The sun is dead
My heart is shattered
You're the reason, that to my eyes
I live with the black sun
This poem wouldn't have been possible without: Tyler Boissnneault, for allowing me 2 use his AMAZING song title: D
THANKS BOISZY! ! ! !
JJ......you are my best friend, and this poem uniquely showcases your talents. I love it :) I agree with uniquely davis, this is beautiful poem.
this poem is unlike any ohter...in a good way thogh hahaa. keep up the good work
I believe that although the poem lacked in length, it made up for it with it's straightforwardness and fairly good vocabulary usage. I would recommend that you structure it better so it's not one big text block, although this poem was short enough to get away with it.
'And now I am lost The sun is dead My heart is shattered You're the reason, that to my eyes I live with the black sun' 10 for these beautiful lines.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/6/2024 11:27:55 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Beautiful. I to have a black sun Great poem! ! ! 10+++