Blurring Path Poem by Ocean MisT

Blurring Path

Rating: 5.0


No room for indifference
neutrality has no place
I'm filled with emptiness
in this abandoned nest

Sitting in a middle
of good and an evil
life is a riddle
of words of unreal

two path to choose
either to win or to lose
and a doubt rose
from head to toes

time will come
decision shall be done
for all of us will gone
then the dark dimmed the sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 April 2008

hey pal..................what a distinctive piece..........in my opinion you've passed with flying colors..........keep writing and at the same time.........learn and learn......don't give up.........you're there pal......this one is a definite10++++

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